spinning plate ([info]navras_rheya) wrote,
@ 2008-03-20 01:52:00
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Current music:Exit Music (For A Film) - Vampire Weekend
Entry tags:fanfiction, lost fic




Title: How One Becomes Henry Gale
Characters: Ben, Juliet
Rating: PG
Word Count: 408
Summary: It's easier to smash his face with a rock.
Note: Set right before Ben makes his first appearance in season 2.
Disclaimer: not mine



“You don’t scare me anymore, Ben,” she said.

“No,” he said, his lips curled up forming something that resembled a smile. “No, I suppose not.”

It could’ve been a lie, the way she stood so confidently in front of him. She wasn’t the same woman she was when she first arrived. She didn’t crouch or look down; she didn’t even pretend to like him anymore. She knew how to lie almost as well as he did, and it might have been his feelings for her that clouded his judgment, but Ben believed her even though his instincts told him not to.

“I need you to this,” he said politely, his voice pleading. “It’s the only way.”

He handed her the rock, purposely grazing her palm. He spent such a long time trying to win her over he overlooked the fact she despised him. A part of him simply wanted her to suffer. He didn’t scare her but he certainly held the power, and showing her even an inkling of affection made her hurt just as much as telling her she couldn’t go home.

He rather enjoyed it. This was the only way he got Juliet to do anything.

“The mouth,” she volunteered.

“The face,” he suggested. “The whole face.”

Juliet sighed. “How hard?”

“You’re the one taking boxing lessons with Richard,” he said, taking a step back. “It doesn’t take much to cut flesh, Juliet. Just do your best. I trust you.”

It was that grin that pumped hatred into her veins. That ever present grin telling her she would never be a step ahead. Hell, she’d never be ten steps behind. She grasped the rock into her palm tighter.

“They won’t fall for this, Ben. They aren’t stupid.”

“They’re desperate for guidance, Juliet,” he said matter-of-factly. “And if they don’t believe me, I’ll make them believe.”

And with that, Juliet swung her arm across with full force. The impact was swift and clean. Smashing across Ben’s cheek, the thump of velocity was gone in a smooth flash and he was soon on his back.

Not less than a second later Rousseau’s trap engulfed him; a giant net disguised in leaves lifted him up to the branches of a large tree.

Juliet let the rock drop. She looked at her hand, a hint of blood on the side of her finger. She wiped it clean across her jeans.

“See you later, Henry,” she said.

.end

feedback is great, great, great :)




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[info]mr_henry_gale
2008-04-20 06:56 am UTC (link)
Very nice indeed. I'm still hoping for a flashback scene of Ben preparing for the role of Henry Gale...

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Thanks and so am I.

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[info]lenina20
2008-04-20 10:12 am UTC (link)
ooooooooooooooooooooh. Perfect. Perfect. I love how Juliet's darker side is explored him, and thought Ben, of course, and how twisted this little scene is in the whole scheme of their relationship, which is and always will be ambiguous and twisted. Perfect.

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 03:11 pm UTC (link)
thanks so much! any ben & juliet will always be twisted.. :D

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[info]benobsessed
2008-04-20 10:45 am UTC (link)
Ienjoyed this. I agree with Mr Henry Gale that we should get this as a flash back.

I have enjoyed how you have described their relationship- one always trying to gain the upper hand

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 03:11 pm UTC (link)
thanks!

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[info]ostia2006
2008-04-20 11:17 am UTC (link)
Really enjoyable fic. This is one part of Ben's past I owuld like to see on the show. Preparing to become Henry Gale.

The interaction and relationship between Ben and Juliet is perfect.

Well done :0)

Edited at 2008-04-20 11:17 am UTC

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 03:11 pm UTC (link)
thanks!

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 11:58 am UTC (link)
oh..... this was good... this was so good.
I love how you show the fact that she changed, that she is not the same person that she was. That always intriguetes me. Love the kickboxin with Richard mention, because we still have no idea how she can fight like a fuckin' ninja!

Edited at 2008-04-20 12:00 pm UTC

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 03:13 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, lu XD!!!!

Yeah, Juliet took boxing lessons with Richard & gun-shooting with Tom.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 03:15 pm UTC (link)
She got fitting lessons ala "kill bill" XDD
I am working on some icons with the photoshop, and I got stuck with the coloring. It is frustrating ...

OMG FINALLY! Cally is dead!!!

Edited at 2008-04-20 03:16 pm UTC

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 03:32 pm UTC (link)
My muse is really gone... Apart from the fic banners I've been these two days, I haven't made a single icon. Usually, I at least make one. But I'm not too worried. I have a shitload of caps from a bunch of fandoms & I got the new Stargate movie capped so when my muse kicks up again I'll have enough pics. I also got all of season 4 of Lost so far capped, and I'm planning to make more. I also manage to make lost season 3 because the caps I made of the DVD have are so incredible.

I made a banner tutorial a looong time ago because it was requested and I found it. Maybe I should post that.

Cally! Dead! I never cared enough for Cally, so her dying didn't really do anything. But I know a huge part of the fandom hates her.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 03:41 pm UTC (link)
My blub is so off right now...It really sucks to be like this. I made some icons, and I think I am gonna delete them all, I don't like the coloring at all. I usually take the caps from lost-media, but right now... I am not inspired at all. *cries*

Oh yeah, that would be great, your banners always are O_o. I am using one at jack/juliet forum. =) a Juliet banner that says :Pick at the scabs, and watch the cigarettes burn.

I was the same about Cally I didn't care about the character. But yesterday while I was watching the epi, I couldn't help thinking "man (writers) kill her already, she is pissing me off". And at the end... LOLOLOLOL!

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:06 pm UTC (link)
No! Don't delete icons! I keep the icons I make that I don't like because I re-edit them some time later. Most of the time I get results I like.

You'd be surprised what goes into making those banners. Not that much.

I don't what it was, but that episode was stomach turning for me. There was stuff in it that just made me go, "ugh..." and I don't know why. I absolutely loved it, but I guess it was the way it was shot. Cally's perspective being so distorted.

ZOMG! I almost forgot to mention: I have a few remixed versions of Videotape! & they're amazing. I can upload if you want.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:11 pm UTC (link)
LOL: You are late. Already delete some. HAHA! I just made a new colorin', I like it a little bit more. Let's see what I get...

To be honest, it wasn't my fauvorite episode. But I love that scene from the beginning, Adama readin' the book to Roslin... they are so cute! Let me ask you sth, is there any epi from bsg that you didn't like? LOL.

Oh yes!!! please please please, I am sure I will love it.

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:14 pm UTC (link)
I loooooove every single episode except "Black Market." It was just retarded. It wasn't bad, it was just completely unnecessary.

A lot of fans thing the second half of season 3 was bad, but I completely disagree. Those episodes, "The Woman King," "Dirty Hands," "A Day In the Life," it was all insight into characters and life on Galactica.

I got a few remixes, I'm gonna upload them in a .zip file. Is that okay?

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:22 pm UTC (link)
Black market is the one of Lee and that woman with the child?? I almost fallen sleep with that episode....

I didn't know that. Well I disagree too, I liked the episodes. Except, maybe that one of people gettin' sick, and that doctor making them worst and killin' them. I found that epi unnecesary as well.

Oh yes of course! It is great.! thank you so much for doing it. I am listenin' "karma police" right now Lately I cannot stop listening "fake plastic trees"... there is sth in that song, I don't know, I just love it, maybe it is the guitar....

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:24 pm UTC (link)
it's only 4 songs and it's uploading now.

Fake Plastic Trees.... :( the lyrics get to me every time. I love listening to it live.

lol "Please go and have babies already!" Hilarious! love it.

*guh, gonna have to listen to Fake Plastic Trees.....

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:29 pm UTC (link)
Yeah go and listen to it right now =)
My itunes programm is playin' "high and dry" =) I will go and check if I can find the live version of fake plastic trees on utube.
Do you realize how addicted have I become to radioehead in less than a week?? evil evil man...

I just made the icon. While I was working on it suddenly the thought came to my mind., so...

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:31 pm UTC (link)
Video Tapez zip & an extra bit: Fake Plastic Trees (acoustic)

That's just an acoustic version. I have two versions of FPT live. Gonna upload :)

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:36 pm UTC (link)
awww... you are so good for doing this. thank you!
downloading everything =)
have u ever been in a concert of radiohead?

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:42 pm UTC (link)
No :( I've never been to a Radiohead concert. It's saaaad.

Okay, I'm uploading another .zip file and this one has:

5 Live versions of Fake Plastic Trees
3 Live versions of Creep
Another version of Talk Show Host
High And Dry (Live)

& a song I like called "Punchdrunk Lovesong Singalong"

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:44 pm UTC (link)
It's 60mb file. IS it too much?

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:48 pm UTC (link)
nahh...
it is okay =)

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:47 pm UTC (link)
awww!!! that is so cool!! all my fauvorite songs in a file!! thank you ! =]
the acoustic version of fake plastic trees is so beautiful.
paul, you should try and go to a concert of them! You love them, you have to go!!
yay the second file just download!

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:52 pm UTC (link)
It's still uploading. I'm gonna start a new post, because the long line is starting again.

look for it all the way at the bottom.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:54 pm UTC (link)
LOL. okay!

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[info]augrah
2008-04-20 03:38 pm UTC (link)
oooh, loved this! His transition into Henry Gale is one of the questions I still want to see more of on the show. This is an amazing interpretation.

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:02 pm UTC (link)
thanks!

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fake plastic tree
[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 04:52 pm UTC (link)
i'm reading a harry potter fic. i haven't read one in a while, but I'm so bored and have no desire to make anything on PS.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 04:55 pm UTC (link)
fake plastic tree. LOL.
You like harry potter? I didn't know that. Well I like it too, I read the books and saw the movies, but I don't read fics of it...
LOL. iorwen_107 wrote a really hot fic about jack/juliet 2 days ago. you should read that one! But I warn you, it is incredibly hot.

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 05:01 pm UTC (link)
the blow job one, yeah i ready it lol.

i like harry potter, the books and the movies, but i'm not into the fandom at all. i've never even iconed it before. i haven't even finished Deathly Hollows. My sister got me a signed copy, she met JK Rowling. She had the book and she's like, "Here, have it. I could care two shits about Harry Potter."

I have Cloverfield here. I was watching it last night but was too tired to sit through it. I might cap it to make icons.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 05:07 pm UTC (link)
yeah that one!!
I like the books more than the movies. Although I think the last 2 movies were so good, but the third one, "the azkaban prisioner" I didn't like the movie at all. I found it dissapointing.
I read the last book during summer, and I only read it in english, and I love it. My fauvorite one for sure. You got it signed??? you should feel lucky and finish the book!!!

What is Cloverfield? I have never heard about that show.
Yesterday when I went to bed pretty late, I put the movie "I am legend" in the computer, and I started watching it.... so boring and scary. After 20 mins of it... I delete it.

paul.. I know you are so good at coloring. what do you think about this one? too much yellow?

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk194/juliet_juju/aliasledger__lost019.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk194/juliet_juju/aliasledger__lost020.jpg

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 05:12 pm UTC (link)
i absolutely love that coloring! (mind sharing your secret in the form of a .psd)? Keep it that way :D

Fake Plastic Trees & Others zip

Cloverfield is this: http://youtube.com/watch?v=IvNkGm8mxiM

I've been meaning to finish Deathly Hollows, even though I know everything that happens. What really turned me off it was the Harry/Ginny. It's strange since I'm not into the fandom, but I just don't see it lol.

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 05:13 pm UTC (link)
fixed link: http://www.sendspace.com/file/i5xwwg for the FPT zip...

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 05:15 pm UTC (link)
LOL. the secret???!!! hahaha. Yeah, sure. I don't usually share my tutorials, but of course I will tell you. Do you have messenger or sth where I can send it to you?

oh yes!! the other zip!! *happy dance*
how cool the version of videotape - (AmpLive Mix ft. Del the Funky Homosapien) is?? that is my fauvorite one. but I love them all.

You have spoiled yourself?? LOL!! Me either!! I don't like that fandom at all. I have always liked hermione/harry...
Do you read spoilers for bsg as well?

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[info]navras_rheya
2008-04-20 05:21 pm UTC (link)
okay, i'm signed in on MSN. My email is panickkaiserman@yahoo.com you can add me if you have msn messenger.

We can finally chat without having to start a whole string lol.

I spoil myself for EVERYTHING. Except, I don't want to know who the final cylon is. I want to be surprised.

That remix is sooooo cool. I love all of them.

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[info]aliasledger
2008-04-20 05:22 pm UTC (link)
LOL: Okay! yeah the crazy lines.
I will add you, hang on.

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[info]tellshannon815
2008-04-20 06:11 pm UTC (link)
Loved this! I also would like to see more about Ben becoming Henry Gale.

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[info]lost_constant
2008-04-20 06:58 pm UTC (link)
wow. what a wonderful piece! You managed to capture the tension and animosity between ben & Juliet perfectly...while still hinting at the underlying subtext between them! This was really good...and an interesting take on his becoming Henry.

Congratulations! I look forward to reading more!

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[info]shikabane_mai
2008-07-20 05:30 am UTC (link)
Very nice. I actually really like the Ben/Juliet dynamic on screen. He's so manipulative, but very intriguing. And I love that Juliet's evolved so much since she arrived on the island until present time. Good, timid doctor turned into "I'll-kick-your-ass-if-you-screw-with-me"-woman.

Anyway. I really hope this happens on the show. Or at least that there's a flashback showing more of Ben becoming Henry Gale and how Juliet's involved. Great one-shot!

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